pretty decent
but for a name like that, it didn't have enough "unce" you know what i mean?
if you want something stand out, try to turn down the volume of other things instead of cranking something up, especially in FL it becomes messy if you turn things up too loud.
also try to study some other songs, listen how the songs are constructed, it will really help you make better music.
i hope to see a complete song of you sometime.
Bibo.