but for a name like that, it didn't have enough "unce" you know what i mean?
if you want something stand out, try to turn down the volume of other things instead of cranking something up, especially in FL it becomes messy if you turn things up too loud.
also try to study some other songs, listen how the songs are constructed, it will really help you make better music.
i hope to see a complete song of you sometime.
Very good, enough said.
P.S. more downloads then listens: when someone downloads, there isnt a point added in listen, but 1 in download, so real amount of listens = listens+downloads.
the percussion sounded kinda weird, and the melody sounds a bit sharp and dry, so maybe use a synthesizer to wetten up the melody and add a more constant drum beat.
keep up the good work :D
P.S.review my christmas loop "Christmas Loop"?
i love it
i tried to play the intro on my guitar(yes, i own a fender telecaster:) ) but i can only get the first riff :S.
anyway great song, i dont need to give criticism because its near perfect :3
P.S.could you please PM me some tabs of the song(or just notes if you dont know how to write tabs)i would really like that :D
it's ok, but maybe change make the rythm a little bit faster and make the bass beat more dominant in the song.
still an 8/10, but it needs some minor changes.
but it lacked a good main rythm, just add a kick drum(or another bass tone) that plays the same rythm on the background and sound even better.
P.S.:this is just my opinion, if you like it better this way, keep it like this, it's already a great song.
the sound is ok, but i suggest you turn down the volume of the main synth, it sounds a bit sharp, and then replace it with something like a flute or piano.
nice, too bad naruto isn't on TV where i live, i'd like it if it showed up in the netherlands...
anyway, nice song, i agree with joowna, it sounds a bit retro, but i like it.
Well, thanks for the review, bro. Well, I should hope it comes on in your area some time, then.
great music, u had several beats in the song, but one nice kick that kept returning in every beat, i liked that =D
nice job and 5/5 from bibo =P
the song is great in total, and there was only 1 little minor part; somewhere in the beginning of the song there is some sort of bass, and it doesn't sound too great. (it continues throughout the whole song) try to fix that sound and then everything is perfect =D
But I like that sound :(
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